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Many people decide on career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

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Every individual will have their own
career
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 plans in order to live a happy
life
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. Some people decide their
career
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 path during their small age and strive to achieve it.
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 obviously leads to a satisfied working
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. There are some other thing
one
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 can do to have a satisfying work
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. I totally agree with
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 and I will explain my reasons and
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 some other ways to have a happy
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 in the following passage.
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, every person during their early age gets motivated by their parents and tutors to have a particular aim in
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. So that,
one
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's mind will be fixed to achieve it.
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, an individual can have a satisfying and happiest
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 in the future without any regrets. Whatever the grade they read, they mainly concentrate on their goal. Indirectly,
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 helps them to collect information and take coaching related to that field.
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,
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 wants to become an IAS officer, he will survive from his early age to achieve it by taking related coaching.
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,
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 has to do what they like to do
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 only people can have satisfying working
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. Anyone, who do the job in which they are not interested cannot lead a happy
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. Even though it fulfil their daily need to survive.
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,
one
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 has a dream to become an officer, but due to some reasons he could not and doing some other work because of
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life
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 long he has that regret which makes him unhappy.
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 can take an inspirational person to become like them and
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, learn an art
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 as music, drawing, sports and so on. Indeed, these different things can
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 guide
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 what they want to become in
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. After having considered all the points that I have discussed above, we can
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 draw a conclusion that every student should have their
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 plan to achieve a goal and to a satisfying work
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 in their future.
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,
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 can plan their
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 graph gradually, so that at
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 stage they get an idea what they wish to become in future.
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