The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statstistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994
The bar charts
illustrates
the rate of marriages and Change the verb form
illustrate
divorce
occuring
in nine countries per thousand people over 13 Correct your spelling
occurring
years
.
Accourding
, to the marriage statistics the year 1981, witnessed more number of weddings except in Correct your spelling
According
Accordingly
Denmark
. Whereas
, the divorce
statistics says
that the Change the verb form
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sepration
rate is Correct your spelling
separation
higer
in the year 1994 but not in Correct your spelling
higher
United
States and Correct article usage
the United
Denmark
.
The Unions in States
in both Correct article usage
the States
the
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years
are more than any
other country. The rest of the countries except Change preposition
in any
Denmark
showns
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show
similar
trend, i.e. , they all are near an average value of six. Correct article usage
a similar
Besides
, America Correct word choice
and Britian
Britian
saw the highest unions in 1981 and Correct your spelling
Britain
Denmark
had minimum
. Correct article usage
the minimum
However
, in 1994 Denmark
had weddings on
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in
the
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second
place and France in the
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last
.
Now, the Divorce
statistics, the Americans have topped in both the
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years
and Italians are at the bottom. Correct article usage
The denish
Denish
population had more Correct your spelling
Danish
seprations
in 1981 and other countries had less in comparison to 1994. Germans have Correct your spelling
separations
same
number of Change the article
a same
the same
divorce
i.e 2 over thousand in both Fix the agreement mistake
divorces
the
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apply
years
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