You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course.Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Krushna Nahak writing
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attention that,
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had enrolled
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a
cricket
course
at your sports club two months back.
However
, due to my health
condition
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i
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will not able to finish the
course
.
Cricket
is my
favorite
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game.
This
course
si
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very special as it has not only
cricket
couseres
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courses
but
also
it has
fitnesss
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fitness
training sessions included in
this
course
.One more is every candidate will have
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to meet and have a session
cricket
with one of the greatest
cricketer
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and
god
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of
cricket
Mr.
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Sachin Tendulkar. I can not continue
this
course
since
i
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got a fracture on my left hand and
docket
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advised me to take
rest
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for six months since it is a major crack.
This
news
deressed
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depressed
dressed
me a lot since
i
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had
good
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batting average and good keeping strength among all the players in our batch.
This
also
brought sadness to my entire family. Till now
i
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have only completed 20% of the
course
. I was wondering is there any refund policy for the remaining
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course
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. I will be
gratefull
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grateful
if you can arrange a refund if it is feasible. I am waiting for your sincere positive reply. Yours Faithfully Krishna Nahak
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