You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course.Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

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letter to bring

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attention that,

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had enrolled

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cricket

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course

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at your sports club two months back.

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, due to my health

condition

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will not able to finish the

course

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Cricket

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is my

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game.

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course

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very special as it has not only

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it has

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training sessions included in

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course

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.One more is every candidate will have

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to meet and have a session

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with one of the greatest

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and

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Sachin Tendulkar. I can not continue

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course

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got a fracture on my left hand and

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advised me to take

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for six months since it is a major crack.

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me a lot since

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had

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batting average and good keeping strength among all the players in our batch.

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brought sadness to my entire family. Till now

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have only completed 20% of the

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. I was wondering is there any refund policy for the remaining

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. I will be

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grateful

if you can arrange a refund if it is feasible. I am waiting for your sincere positive reply. Yours Faithfully Krishna Nahak

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

206 words

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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course.Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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graph about exports from the UK to other countries abroad

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