Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?

Social sites

such

as

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(

Facebook

) considered to have bad influence both on individuals and

society

. Massive use of social sites increases the laziness,

as a result

, it

directly hamper

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directly hampers

the health and social performance.

However

, while I believe it has certain drawbacks

,

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,

I

aslo

in addition

also

would like to point the beneficial factor. It is debatable to discuss about the disadvantages of

Facebook

.

Firstly

, social sites

has compressed

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have compressed

the world, because of which

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,

people

donot

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do not

need to go outside for basic possibilities

,

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,

namely, you can order food and clothes

andget

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and get

delivered to your house,

as a result

, people are getting lazy day by day.

For instance

, Unlike other children, my eighty year old cousin

donot

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do not

like to go outside to play

besides

he uses

facebook

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Facebook

and spend his evening.

Secondly

, the participation among the

society

memeber

one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)

member

members

is being disturbed. Some people are avoiding the major functions.

Thus

, creating incoordination and absence in the development of the

society

.

Additionally

,

Facebook

also have

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also has

the clear beneficial approach.

Facebook

has special

deatures

a prominent attribute or aspect of something

features

of

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for

creating

group here

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group, here

you can add people that you interest.

For example

, our

society

once organized the festival with the

hepl

give help or assistance; be of service

help

of

group

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the group

groups

a group

, the bulk message was sent through all the people,

therefore

each of them were engaged and made event successful.

Moreover

, people can now

commmunicate

transmit information

communicate

with every individual for making plans and sharing knowledge with the

commom

belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public

common

platform. To conclude,

Facebook

has marginal disadvantages and advantages. Of course, it

depens

be contingent upon (something that is elided)

depends

depend

upon the

precpective

of or concerned with or related to the future

prospective

use of people. The use should be limited whereas reality approach should be formed