Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?

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Social sites
such
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as
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Facebook
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) considered to have bad influence both on individuals and
society
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. Massive use of social sites increases the laziness,
as a result
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, it
directly hamper
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directly hampers
the health and social performance.
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, while I believe it has certain drawbacks
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,
I
aslo
in addition
also
would like to point the beneficial factor. It is debatable to discuss about the disadvantages of
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.
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, social sites
has compressed
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have compressed
the world, because of which
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,
people
donot
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do not
need to go outside for basic possibilities
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,
namely, you can order food and clothes
andget
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and get
delivered to your house,
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, people are getting lazy day by day.
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, Unlike other children, my eighty year old cousin
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do not
like to go outside to play
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he uses
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facebook
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Facebook
and spend his evening.
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, the participation among the
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memeber
one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)
member
members
is being disturbed. Some people are avoiding the major functions.
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, creating incoordination and absence in the development of the
society
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.
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,
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also have
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also has
the clear beneficial approach.
Facebook
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has special
deatures
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
features
of
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for
creating
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group, here
you can add people that you interest.
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, our
society
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once organized the festival with the
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give help or assistance; be of service
help
of
group
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the group
groups
a group
, the bulk message was sent through all the people,
therefore
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each of them were engaged and made event successful.
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, people can now
commmunicate
transmit information
communicate
with every individual for making plans and sharing knowledge with the
commom
belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public
common
platform. To conclude,
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has marginal disadvantages and advantages. Of course, it
depens
be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depends
depend
upon the
precpective
of or concerned with or related to the future
prospective
use of people. The use should be limited whereas reality approach should be formed

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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