Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

There is myriad of museums which required

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fee

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for visiting, but

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not the same case for other institutions. As far as I am concerned, the upsides of entrance

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eclipsed by its downsides in the sense that the

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rates may decline. The main benefit of

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fee

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is that the income can

used

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use

for daily

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is crucial to protect the valued assets inside the museums.

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example

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, the temperature and humidity of the

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may directly affect the collection. It is important to maintain the

favorable

encouraging or approving or pleasing

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temperature for art storage as the high temperature can shrink the artworks.

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, a lot of museums conduct exhibitions at times, and

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could not have been done without a sum of money to hire professionals and to buy equipment. The Hong Kong Science

Museum

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,

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, has monthly exhibitions on different themes and professionals are employed for

introduction

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the introduction

and exhibition layout.

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amplifies how the

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fee

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is beneficial for

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the museum daily operation

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. Granted, an entrance

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may have the positive effect on

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operation

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, but the

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figures may have

negative effect

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a negative effect

negative effects

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charges. Take parents as

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example

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an example

, visiting

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would be one of their most frequent leisure

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activities

as the

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serves an educational role.

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, more and more educational parks have sprung up in the past couple of years and even free of charges.

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, the Kowloon walled city park in Hong Kong is preserves a number of historical

building

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buildings

for visitors to explore the classical Chinese culture. In that case, parents may have additional choices

to reconsider

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reconsidering

the venues for experiencing the

history

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historical

contexts other than history

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. To sum up, the disadvantage of an entrance

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are overshadowed

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is overshadowed

by the benefits accruing from a stable income.

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, having weighted up the pros and cons, I am convinced that

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museums

the museum

a museum

should charge an

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fee

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for the sake of daily

operation

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.