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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#individuals #environment #governments #companies #difference
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Nowadays
,
Accept space
,
protecting
Use synonyms
environment
Suggestion
the environment
 has become a major issue among the public.There is an ongoing
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
 that only government and large companies can improve
environmant
Suggestion
the environment
environment
environmental
.I totally disagree with
this
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 as
its
it is
it's
 the
responsiability
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
 of all individuals to save
there
of them or themselves
their
 planet.Lets discuss about
this
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 view.
Firstly
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,
Accept space
,
in recent days most of the individuals are educated and knowing the importance of saving
Use synonyms
environment
Suggestion
the environment
.
For example
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,
Accept space
,
people have started planting trees
,
Accept space
,
making an attempt to use
minimal quantity
Suggestion
a minimal quantity
the minimal quantity
minimal quantities
 of water for daily routines.Few people have started using public transport to avoid more fuel
combusion which
Accept comma addition
combustion, which
combustion which
 affects
Use synonyms
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. On
other hand
Suggestion
the other hand
,
Accept space
,
its
it is
it's
 true that
governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
 and companies can improve the
environment
Use synonyms
 is larger extent
,
Accept space
,
as companies can invest money and government has the authority to make rules.
For example
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,
Accept space
,
ban of plastic.Public have started using
papaer
a material made of cellulose pulp derived mainly from wood or rags or certain grasses
paper
 bags or cloth bags
instead
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 of plastic. To conclude
,
Accept space
,
its not only government or
comapnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
 that can improve
Use synonyms
environment its
Suggestion
the environment, its
the environment its
 the right of all the individuals to take part in saving
there
of them or themselves
their
 planet.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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