The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
The pie charts show the amount of
revenue
and expenditures in 2016 Use synonyms
and
for a children’s charity in the USA. Calibration of Correct word choice
apply
date
is done in percentage.
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data
Overall
, the total amount of Linking Words
income
was just enough to cover the expenditures. Use synonyms
Moreover
, donated food made the highest share Linking Words
in
total Change preposition
of
income
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while
the maximum money Linking Words
spent
on program service.
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was spent
To begin
with, donated food provided the most of the Linking Words
revenue
for the charity, at 86%. Use synonyms
Similarly
, with regard to expenditures, program services, Linking Words
calculated
for nearly all of the outgoings, at 95.8%. The other categories were much smaller. Community contributions were the Add a missing verb
were calculated
second
largest Linking Words
revenue
source, Use synonyms
brought
in 10.4% of Wrong verb form
bringing
overall
Linking Words
income
, and Use synonyms
this
was followed by program Linking Words
revenue
, at 2.2%. Use synonyms
on the other hand
, investment Linking Words
income
, government grants, and other Use synonyms
income
were very small sources of Use synonyms
revenue
, accounting for only 0.8% combined.
There were only two other expenditure items, fundraising and management and general, with a slight difference both accounting for 2.6% and 1.6% respectively.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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