The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
The pie charts show the amount of
revenue
and expenditures in 2016 and
for a children’s charity in the USA. Calibration of Correct word choice
apply
date
is done in percentage.
Correct your spelling
data
Overall
, the total amount of income
was just enough to cover the expenditures. Moreover
, donated food made the highest share in
total Change preposition
of
income
while
the maximum money spent
on program service.
Add a missing verb
was spent
To begin
with, donated food provided the most of the revenue
for the charity, at 86%. Similarly
, with regard to expenditures, program services, calculated
for nearly all of the outgoings, at 95.8%. The other categories were much smaller. Community contributions were the Add a missing verb
were calculated
second
largest revenue
source, brought
in 10.4% of Wrong verb form
bringing
overall
income
, and this
was followed by program revenue
, at 2.2%. on the other hand
, investment income
, government grants, and other income
were very small sources of revenue
, accounting for only 0.8% combined.
There were only two other expenditure items, fundraising and management and general, with a slight difference both accounting for 2.6% and 1.6% respectively.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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