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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Humans are a kind social animal, we cannot live without connecting to other people. A part of people suggest that teenagers should get the chance to volunteer in the
community
service
, which should be included in the high school term. Personally, I support
this
 idea, which brings benefits to both teenagers and the
community
. I believe that the best human value is that comprehension
to
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of
 others. Teenagers will learn to comprehend others and grain ethics
for
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in
 their life, when they experience the
community
service
.
Moreover
, it is a good way to build a relationship with elder residents, that they face to face the elder residents rather than get grosses from other youth. If they do not have a chance to serve the
community
, they will not fit into the society,
then
 they may become
more rebel
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more rebellious
 and less cooperate with other people.
Although
, some parents may argue that working for free is unfair to the young people, I still suggest that helping society is valuable for the mind, not for money.
In addition
, according to a report from UQ, the most happiness in human’s life is that people get the reward from the person who received the help. It is
more value
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more valuable
 than the current, that we should let young people understand and experience at. In conclusion, unpaid
community
service
 may a little unfair to teenagers, but I believe that the value and experience
from
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of
 these jobs will improve their life. And it is right that
school
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the school
put
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puts
 the
service
 programme into their study term.
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