You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear sir,
I am writing to you about the business meeting which I had at your hotel
last
week. All the participants agreed with the hotel seating arrangements as well as
the size of the sitting chairs. Besides
that, the lighting arrangement was also
fascinating as all the staff members appreciated it.
Unfortunately, everyone was unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. In other words
, We booked the menu for meat along with
the potatoes and rice; however
, the meat served was not hot and was too raw. Moreover
, we also
complained to the on-site server but we did not get any appropriate response.
I would suggest that food should be served hot as not so many people like cold food. Also
, please focus on the menu selected by the bookers so that you can fulfil the customer's need
in a proper way.
I appreciate your time and consideration.
Regards,
Ankit KumarFix the agreement mistake
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