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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to the advanced technology which can prevent and solve crime.Do you agree or disagree?

#crime #rate #technology
In globalisation era, the word has been suffering from numerous issue and one of them is a criminalisation.Some people believe that advanced technology is a beneficial in preventing and taking
crime
.
however
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However
, another school of thought refused
it arguing
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it, arguing
 that it has an adverse effect on
crime
 rates making
this
 topic a hot button where in icon side with the former statement. At the onset, it is
a
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an
 irrefutable that
crime
 is a serious and growing problem in the most of the country.There
are
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is
 the reason to prove that a these days
crime
 rate are dropping.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
 and foremost, due to the use of artificial Technologies
suchas
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such as
 a fingerprint and the face
recognisation
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
recognition
 system police can easily identified by Wanted criminal as
result
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a result
 in arresting criminal faster than
past
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the past
.To better illustrate
this
 according to a recent survey conducted by
Times
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the Times
 of India
reveal
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reveals
 that, China all the 80 %
crime
 cases by using
face recognisation system
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a face recognition system
face recognition system
 as result drop the
crime
 rate in China.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, since use various safety
sensors and
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sensors, and
 camera in private shops and public area
,
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,
People are monitored by owner of shops and security
guard which
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guard, which
 eventually identify dangerous tools
such
 as a knife and gun and uncommon activity which it can help to stop
this
. In accession to
this
 the most influential point in support of my view is that, owing to advancement in Computer technology,
cybercrime
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cyber crime
 department monitors and analyse the cyber activity and they can track the hackers location and arresting them, which
consequently
 reduce the same cybercrime
such
aonline
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
 scam and so on.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
government
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the government
 has used to social media to spread the awareness about the cyber activity among society
,
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,
So people avoid the installing hacking apps and do not support the personal information on websites which result in it can prevent the cyber
crime
. Agglomerating the about the discussion
,
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,
although
 the use of Advanced technology causes the appearance and influence the new
crime but
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crime, but
also
, I believe that it has a significant role in Reducing model
crime
.

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