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More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home . Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

#companies #employees #work #home #development
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Technological advancement has led to a decline in the
use
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 of physical structures where people present themselves daily for
work
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. I am strongly of the opinion that
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 reduction is a good progress. Owning to the fact that the
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 workers
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 in commuting has been scrapped completely, workers are compelled to develop in the area of Information technology skills and project deliverables are achieved in lesser
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.
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, one major improvement working from
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 has caused is the best
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 of
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 used in commuting.
Time
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 spent moving from
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 to the office is saved and is used in achieving proper
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 goals and objectives. The number of hours spent on the road is almost the same as the number of hours required to spend at
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 for workers in the very busy cities like Lagos.
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, people who
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 on the mainland spend an average of 6-8hours to and fro office every day.
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 valuable
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 is put into performing key tasks when working from
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,
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, energy is preserved and they have more zeal to give the best to their jobs.
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 to valuable
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, employees are compelled to develop themselves in the
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 of Information technology (IT) packages. Working from
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 would entail sending vital details of
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 back and forth via the internet,
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 the need for workers to get acquainted with software that would enable them
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 effectively. Specific software skill development has increased over
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as a result
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 of
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 development.
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, project deliverables are now completed on
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. Since it faster and efficient to
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 at
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, project deliverables are achieved in the least possible
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 with minimal mistakes. An estimator who works at his comfort gets accurate measurements from plan and comes up with a near accurate bill of quantities than his colleague who still have to get to the office to
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, having been worn out from the hustle of arriving at his place of
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. In conclusion, I believe that
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 arrangement has helped many organizations as there are now better ways of doing jobs.
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 it is argued that working at
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 tends to make one lazy, but with discipline one can overcome
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 attitude and achieve more.
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