In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Earning more
money
is the every human tendency, the
believes
a supporter who accepts something as true
believers
beliefs
are on the
government
way of thinking to make a law for providing handsome
money
on a hand of a common man to high salaries or it should be on
certain level
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a certain level
certain levels
, as per
this
my perceptive is somewhat different
for
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from
this
situation. There are certain things which differ from the
country
's point of view with
there
of them or themselves
their
developing
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developmental
development
status, rules and regulation follow as per
requiste
express the need or desire for; ask for
request
requests
of countryman living with the
harmoniously
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harmonies
harmonic
. The
pereceptive
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perception
perceptive
of people is to earn more
money
despitely
with great urgency
desperately
the providing burden on the
government
, the muddle will produce because of earning
more
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more money to increase
money
increase the inflation rate because as a developing nation, the liquid
money
will
reduce
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then reduce the
then
the
government
spending will increase along
money
value decrease
becasue
for the reason that; on account of
because
of the
country
's situation seen on Gross
dometsic
of concern to or concerning the internal affairs of a nation
domestic
product which
also
gradually on down
track
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the track
. As most of the
country
's
government
backpoint
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back point
is the agriculture which
also affect
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also affects
because of earning high salaries by
government
employees, private company workers and executives will spend on
emeinty
pleasantness resulting from agreeable conditions
amenity
items. So salaries have to be on standard level where it is
control
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controlled
and increase by checking all parameters of the
government
.
Numerous small
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The numerous small country
country
where earning
are
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is
high
becsause
for the reason that; on account of
because
of
population which
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population, which
also
affect the GDP of the
country
, but most of are developed
country
and
government earning
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government, earning
are high because of the good tax payer so
government
funds are
spend
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spent
more on
development
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the development
of the
country
, by
this
salaries of most of the
empolyees
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
are more. People think
for
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of
luxious
displaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
luxurious
life by spending on goods and items, as per
this
growth of
country
expand in all areas. To conclude that, the salaries are not the major
concern but
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concern, but
the earning are
on
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at
inflation rate
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an inflation rate
of the
country
so as per
this
levels
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level
of salaries are to be made to protect the rights of the peoples to spend on daily requirement products.

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