the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented graph compares the number of
incidents
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three different kinds of crimes in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. As an
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trend, it can be clearly seen that burglary crimes had the largest drop during
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ten-years period,
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car theft and robbery remained almost steady with little fluctuations. In regard to
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burglary, in 2003, it was the most widespread crime among these groups with an aggregate count of just under 3500
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in 2004, it reached an absolute peak of roughly 3750 cases.
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, the tendency changed until achieving its own minimum level of approximately 1200
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it remained quite constant. Car theft throughout
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time frame had slight waves starting from a count of approximately 2800
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and ending with a similar number, but it became the most common crime in 2012, overcoming
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burglary.
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, robbery, which was the less important crime in 2003, has respected
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trend and reached
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trough level
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500 cases in 2008, which was the lowest number on
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diagram.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words incidents with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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