the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented graph compares the number of
incidents
in
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three different kinds of crimes in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. As an
overall
trend, it can be clearly seen that burglary crimes had the largest drop during
this
ten-years period,
whereas
car theft and robbery remained almost steady with little fluctuations. In regard to
the
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burglary, in 2003, it was the most widespread crime among these groups with an aggregate count of just under 3500
incidents
,
then
in 2004, it reached an absolute peak of roughly 3750 cases.
Afterward
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, the tendency changed until achieving its own minimum level of approximately 1200
incidents
and
next
it remained quite constant. Car theft throughout
this
time frame had slight waves starting from a count of approximately 2800
incidents
and ending with a similar number, but it became the most common crime in 2012, overcoming
the
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burglary.
Instead
, robbery, which was the less important crime in 2003, has respected
this
trend and reached
is
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trough level
at
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500 cases in 2008, which was the lowest number on
this
diagram.
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