the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented graph compares the number of
incidents
in
three different kinds of crimes in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012.
As an Change preposition
of
overall
trend, it can be clearly seen that burglary crimes had the largest drop during this
ten-years period, whereas
car theft and robbery remained almost steady with little fluctuations.
In regard to the
burglary, in 2003, it was the most widespread crime among these groups with an aggregate count of just under 3500 Correct article usage
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incidents
, then
in 2004, it reached an absolute peak of roughly 3750 cases. Afterward
, the tendency changed until achieving its own minimum level of approximately 1200 Change the spelling
Afterwards
incidents
and next
it remained quite constant.
Car theft throughout this
time frame had slight waves starting from a count of approximately 2800 incidents
and ending with a similar number, but it became the most common crime in 2012, overcoming the
burglary.
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Instead
, robbery, which was the less important crime in 2003, has respected this
trend and reached is
trough level Correct your spelling
its
at
500 cases in 2008, which was the lowest number on Change preposition
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