Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays supermarkets are replacing small, local businesses in most of the major cities of the world. Some people think that

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will cause local communities to disappear; I totally agree with these people's

view

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views

because of two reasons:

emmigration

migration into a place (especially migration to a country of which you are not a native in order to settle there)

immigration

migration

and lack of

communication

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of all, If local businesses close, workers might want to find a better place to live and thrive economically. It is very common in many parts of the world to see people close their businesses because they cannot compete with bigger competitors,

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as supermarkets. Many of these people decide to travel abroad to find a

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bright her

future for them and their families, and so they emigrate from their countries, causing the

desintegration

in a decomposed state

disintegration

of their local communities.

Furtheremore

in addition

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, if small, local stores close, there will be less places for people to gather together to talk and share experiences.

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will reduce

communication

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among

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between

the community and will cause it to

dissappear

get lost, as without warning or explanation

disappear

.

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, a small grocery store where locals used to get together to talk while having a beer after playing soccer is shut down, and now the people in the community have to go somewhere else.

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is a way of cutting down

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communication

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the communication

inside local communities which leads to a separation between its members, which in turn brings about the destruction of the community itself. In conclusion, the expansion of supermarkets

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affects

not only local

businesses but

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businesses, but

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local communities, and it can cause the destruction of these social structures due to the phenomenon of emigration and the lack of

communication

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and places to share experiences.