You want to invite a famous actor to open the new theatre. Write a letter to this famous actor. In your letter • give some information about the new theatre • invite her/him to open the new theatre • explain why she/he would be a good person to open the theatre

Dear David, I am writing

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letter to invite you to attend our new theatre opening ceremony on behalf of

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Entertainment company. As you probably have noticed, our new theatre is the only 3D theatre with the latest advanced AI technology in Halifax. It has been built for three years and will open officially on 1st May. I know your hometown is Halifax, where you had been living and studying for around 20 years before moving to Toronto to start you actor career. I would be grateful if you could show up as a local actor to participate in

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open ceremony and deliver a speech. I know you are so busy, and if you cannot give a speech, I fully understand. There are two reasons why I sent the invitation to you. First of all, as a well-known actor, you have a huge number of fans, so your attendance will attract people to our cinema.

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, I know you just finished filming one of your movies, which will be shown around the world. Your movie will become the first movie to play in our new cinema. If you have any questions regarding the event, please contact me without any hesitation. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Lily Liu

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Mar 15, 2026

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Task response: Add one more clear detail about the new theatre, like size, seats, or place.

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Task response: Say more clearly why this actor is the best person, not only famous but also from Halifax.

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Coherence and cohesion: Some lines are a bit long. Use shorter sentences to make ideas easier to follow.

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Coherence and cohesion: Check small link words and word forms, for example 'actor career' should be 'acting career'.

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Task response: You answered all three parts of the letter well.

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Task response: The tone is polite and right for a formal letter.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

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Coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph mostly has one main idea.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

214 words

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