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Some people say international sports event help in world peace? Do you agree or disagree?

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Some individual states that global games events are advantageous for community peace.
This
 essay agrees that global games events play a vital role for world peace.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will discuss the sense of
brotherhood
 and exchange of tradition among the worldwide people and
secondly
, it will discuss the nepotism of games authority to create new
country
 order frequently for international events. Global games give thrive to
brotherhood
 along with exchange of tradition all over the world. People of different communities gather in one place, play together, stay together, which develop a sense of
brotherhood
 among them and obviously when people of different countries meet they share their traditions with each other.
For Example
, in Olympics games which are started from 2014,
player
 from all over the world gather in the same place to show
brotherhood
 and an exchange of traditions.
However
, International games authority should be very care full while organizing
event
 as they always try to organize the
event
 in different countries because if the
event
 will always hold in the same
country
 than
this
 might be the injustice for other countries
player
. Every nation should get the chance to host the
event
this
 will support their players and
country
 in both ways financially and sportsman spirit.
For example
, since 2008 Champions Trophy series of cricket is always held in India no matter which
country
 team is winning and
this
 leads other
country
player
 with a sense of injustice. In conclusion essay agrees that global games events are helpful for peace; provide friendship between
player
 and countries, interchange traditions and bias of global games authority for building new
event
 order with a regular interval of time.
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