The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides information about how many
households
owning
and Wrong verb form
owned
renting
accommodation in England and Wales Wrong verb form
rented
from
1918 and 2011. Change preposition
between
Overall
, households
who owned settlement
increased over the period, Fix the agreement mistake
settlements
while
the one
renting Correct pronoun usage
ones
settlement
continued to decrease.
Looking first at the data from households
owning accommodation, the number of people who preferred owning a house rose significantly from around 20% at the beginning of the period to above 30% in 1939 and remained at that figure by the end of 1953. For that year, house ownership continued to grow and peaked at nearly 70% in 2001, before it dropped slightly to around 65% in the final decade.
Regarding the data from households
who prefer renting, there were around 85% of people renting
a house at the start of the course. The number began to drop Wrong verb form
rent
at
around 70% and remained stable between 1939 and 1953. Renting Change preposition
to
settlement
declined dramatically and reach at
the same figure (exactly 50%) Change preposition
apply
with
owning Change preposition
as
settlement
in 1971. The number of renting accommodations continued to decrease unit it fell to a low point at around 30% in 2001 and rise slowly to about 36% by the end of the course.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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