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Some people believe that libraries are waste of resources and computer should replace them . discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #libraries #waste #resources #computer
In
this
 revolutionary world, sharing knowledge is of the utmost priority. While many centralized libraries provide ample scope for reading, youngsters are opting for digital books as well. Even though, computers are proving undoubtedly beneficial, they can not be the only alternative to traditional libraries. Many social sites now provide digital or E-books. Youngsters find it, as a fascinating experience of reading. They can read a
book
 without compromising on time. Many books, magazines are available at a sing
le
Suggestion
as
in
on
 download. Someone should not even worry about physically storing the
book
. In fact, once the reading done; immediately, the
book
 can be sent to trash files. You don't need to be always checking on a date
f
Suggestion
for
or
book
 return. Some ebooks are available with the audio version, so one can easily ‘hear’ the
book
 on Kinder.
Although
 , there
ar
Accept space
,
e numerous benefits of computers and ebooks, I am a strong supporter of libraries. Many libraries are located centrally and what attracts me is their architecture. The organizational skills of the employees in the library are incredible. You can peacefully read a variety of novels, books, references, periodicals which may not be available on computers. Reading
book
 can be less tiring to eyes as i
t is
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the eyes
 a device-free reading,
also
 decrease the risks of other ophthalmo
logic disorder
the branch of medicine concerned with the eye and its diseases
ophthalmologies
s. Kids can read and enjoy colorful
books in
having striking color
colourful
 the library and they can borrow the
book
 at home so that they don't get distracted by gaming sites online.

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