Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cites and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

In today’s era, people like to live in the urban area which provides modern facility and
also
attract people from the
countryside
as well.
This
essay will discuss the problems that faced by oldies who have to live alone in their home and to solve it government should start to develop the
countryside
.
To begin
with, one of the important problems is that the old one’s has to live alone in their native
place
as they want the development of their adults so, they allow them to leave the
countryside
.
For example
, in most of the urban areas having the
opportunity
where one should work and get the money to feed their family.
Moreover
, the
countryside
having less
opportunity
for the one’s development; it cannot contain any company’s which provides employment, so all the younger want to leave it and at
last
, only oldies were there, and no one is there to look them as well.
On the other hand
, to solve
this
problem government should start to build a new
opportunity
which, provides a large amount of employment, so people who live in
this
place
never having thought to leave it. Even for the companies the
countryside
provides the large space in a less budget.
For instance
, most of the new company was developed in the
countryside
, it would be beneficial for owners as well nearby people in terms it serves job.
Furthermore
, there is no need to leave their native for the younger and they provide the support and care to their oldies as they deserve it; spent their later life healthy with their loved ones. In conclusion, While the
countryside
having less
opportunity
for the development so, a person from that
place
, travel to the urban area, but the government should start a new project in that
place
so, they live their life happily with their entire family.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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