Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is the case? What can governments do to help the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #case #governments #amount

Production of garbage has been increased with the passage of time.In my

opinin

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opinion, this

opinion this

this

is true.

This

essay will discuss about the initiatives which are required by the

government

in order to

reduced

Suggestion

reduce

the left overs. I

beleived

accept as true; take to be true

believed

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due to

devlopment

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

developments

infrastrucure

the basic structure or features of a system or organization

infrastructure

and up growing

industries

Suggestion

industry

industry's

waste

producion

the act or process of producing something

production

has been increased exponentially.

This

is the crucial moment for every state officials and the public itself because

waste

can cause serious damage to the health. Both

Government

and public should play their roles at their end in order to

reduced

Suggestion

reduce

the production of garbage or rubbish.People should avoid to throw their

grabbage

food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)

garbage

road

Suggestion

the road

roads

or on streets and always use dustbins to throw rubbish so it will help to keep them clean.

On the other hand

government

should be more proactive to resolve

this

by creating different

deaprtments

a specialized division of a large organization

departments

department

which can keep checking industries and cleaning companies to make sure that the produced

waste

will be minimal.

This

will make sure that

waste

Suggestion

the waste

produced by different industries like

checmical

relating to or used in chemistry

chemical

chemicals

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plastic can be minimal.Recycling process will help to decrease the rate of

waste

production therfore

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production, therefore

production therefore

government

should invest more in

this

area.

Awaranes

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Awareness

program should

organized

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organize

by the state to educate the

public

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public, for

for instance

, electronic media

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TV or radio can be very helpful in

this

regard. To conclude, it is

cleared

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clear

that

government

plays the vital role to

decreased

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decrease

the production of

waste

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However

, public help is

also

required to speed up the process.

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234 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumerism
single-use products
landfills
recycling programs
sustainability
non-recyclable materials
throwaway culture
upgrading
advertising
packaging materials
convenience-oriented lifestyles
environmental impact
infrastructure
waste management policies
population growth
electronic waste (e-waste)

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