Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Although
some individuals are of the thought that the death
penalty should never be imposed, other people think that it should be used on the most grievous criminals
. While
sentencing most serious offenders to capital punishment
is an easy and quick solution, I believe that all human beings have a right to live and so should never be allowed however
major the crime is.
On the one hand, punishment
as death
sentences for serious crimes provides a short-term solution. By announcing these kinds of punishment
, the government officials can take them off streets and deter happening
of crimes including smuggling, premeditated murders, patricide, human trafficking, and smuggling. Verb problem
the occurrence
Thus
resulting in a decline of
serial Change preposition
in
criminals
and repeated
offenders in society. In Singapore, Wrong verb form
repeat
for example
, when capital punishment
was imposed on smugglers and drug traffickers there was a tenfold decrease in such
offenses
. Change the spelling
offences
However
, I believe that these sentences are unjust because we are infringing on someone’s right to live.
On the other hand
, capital punishment
should not be sentenced irrespective of the severity of the crime for it is inhumane to do so. To live is a birthright of every human being and executing or hanging a criminal is being cruel with
him. If they are Change preposition
to
criminals
, the law-givers cannot do the same and eventually become a criminal in the name of justice. For example
, a questionnaire conducted by one of the press reporters of
South India revealed that 60% of people replied, ”Change preposition
in
criminals
should never be hanged till Capitalize word
Criminals
death
, how can the court be so harsh!”. I believe that no one including the jury has the right to be so cruel that criminals
are executed.
In conclusion, some would say that for very serious criminals
, the sentence of death
is just for it is a viable solution. I believe this
kind of punishment
is against humanity and should never be used whether the crime is major or minor.Submitted by ishaaqismail05 on
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