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According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happen? How was tourism different in the past?

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Recent polls show that tourists prefer to remain in holiday residents when they travel to foreign countries
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, they have not
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tended
 to getting to know new culture of destination where they go compare to tourists were in six decades ago. I believe that, there
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a wide variety
 of causes tourists do not desire to possess a new experience of resort culture.
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nowadays most of the hotels and residents have satisfaction services and luxury equipments because of that, the visitors prefer to stay in their residents.
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, there are plenty of modern building with particular services in Dubai and remarkable people are eager to spend leisure time inside of residents.
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Secondly
, due to the hectic lifestyle of
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people, in
 fact, most of individuals are so busy and if they can find any spare time I think, staying at hotel is the best
choise
the person or thing chosen or selected
choice
course
choices
 for them. On the other hands, it
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looked
 like in the past people were more brave
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 because of
this
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 they packed their bags and started
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a new adventure
 easily into the a new
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place
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They use to economical journey and the main target of them was visiting a
strange spectacular
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strange, spectacular
 scenery and found out new cultures word wide. Of
course
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course, such
such
 sore of travel is not popular these days,
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nevertheless, if
 anyone has enough cordage to going adventure
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 they will not regret of their action. In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, today’s most of visitors are more comfortable to remain in the resort and it is naturally they do not learn new things about other cultures. I believe that the roles of government and tourist agency are really significant to convince of visitors to watch tourist attractions like people who travelled in the past.
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