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Nowadays people get married and have kids in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?

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In today's society, public opinion about the birthing problem has changed and the modern generation in
this
 volatile social
conditions
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condition
 tends to postpone their
first
 childbirth. Personally, I believe that under the circumstance increasing
pregnancy age
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pregnancy, age
 has positive effects over family and society condition and status quo
also
 accept
this
 trend. The fact that giving birth at later stages of
life
 has been more common stemming from running business and job promotion and regarding the difficult situation to earn livelihood many couple precautions to avoid pregnancy. Driving force of
this
 approach caused by escalating expenditure that
impel
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impels
couple both
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couple, both
 men and women working full-time. On the whole,
this
 tendency has long been a common thing because people want to be financially stable and strong enough to properly take charge of the new responsibility.
Furthermore
, getting married late has
positive effect
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a positive effect
 on family commitment
as a result
 of being couples mature.
Although
, the
parents
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parent
 structure the community of aging population their age and experience provide a suitable cultural infrastructure that results in offspring have a good upbringing. Even get married over 30s can due to the fact that adults achieve in their activities including good quality education and comprehensive education and in terms of wisdom can cope with problems more logically and in a nutshell will bring a close-knit family that it
never break
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never breaks
 down at ease. In conclusion, the consequences of having a settle married
life
 and birthing problem stems from how parents attain a changeless
life
 and
this
 dire need for
provoking great
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provoking, great
 upheaval in the intellectual evolution and stable income and these are not possible unless get married in about middle-age. The thing is we need to a settle
life
 and its required is
be
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being
 more mature in all fields.
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