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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages.

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Studying abroad is becoming increasingly popular among student these days.
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 students will face cultural and linguistic challenges while studying abroad, it will
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 give them endless career opportunities later on in their life. In my opinion, students will get more benefits by studying overseas, even though they may have to pay a significant amount of money. The greatest benefit of studying abroad is that students will have life experiences that will improve themselves as a good person. Students unleash their unknown hidden talents when they go through practical situations which increases in their knowledge and experience.
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, the quality of the overseas education is more likely to be higher and it linked to their modern trends.
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, when I studied in Canada as a twenty years old I was continually pushed out of my comfort zone and that I had to adapt it no matter what.
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 type of advantages of studying abroad helps you become a better person along with learning. The main challenge that students will face while studying abroad is the different type of culture and the
language
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. Living
between
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among
 unknown people for the
first
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 time is scary and awkward.
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, while studying in Canada
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I
 had to frequently make a fool of myself in order to communicate with local people in their
language
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. Learning new culture and
language
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 takes
sometime
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some time
 and in that time you have to face so many problems. In conclusion, the number of University students chose to study abroad these days. Students will experience social and
language
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barriers but
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barriers, but
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resistances
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resistance
 will lead them to the main advantage which is personal growth. In my opinion, studying abroad is more advantages than disadvantages.

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