Relevance of health care facilities to healthy living. discuss both views

Health
care
facilities have been improved largely
wtih
expresses the means used
with
advancement of technology.
Health
care
facilities have a major impact on healthy living conditions.
This
essay will discuss how
relavant
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
health
care
facilities are with current living conditions and it
also
explains how they are not
relavant
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
in few other aspects. Our current living condition
are mainly influenced
Suggestion
is mainly influenced
by our current
health
care
facilities. Many
health
related problems are now
been
the state or fact of existing
being
treated by these advanced facilities which now makes easier for
health
practioners
someone who practices a learned profession
practitioners
.
For instance
, facilities
such
as
chemo
a communist nation that covers a vast territory in eastern Asia; the most populous country in the world
China
are
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
used to treat cancer while doctors used to find it difficult when they treat in
traditional way
Suggestion
the traditional way
a traditional way
. These
health
care
facilities are much interlinked with each other which can treat
alot
Suggestion
a lot
of cases. While some of them strongly
condem
express strong disapproval of
condemn
condemned
the fact regarding the
relavance
the relation of something to the matter at hand
relevance
relevancy
of
health
care
facilities and healthy living. They believe that the current living
conditon
a state at a particular time
condition
conditions
depends on
dietery
Suggestion
diet
dietary
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and physical activities one undergoes during their
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
.
For example
, WHO in 2017
decalred
made known or openly avowed
declared
decreed
that people eating unhealthy food are more likely to get hospitalised once they turn 50.
In addition
to it, many of the
athelete's
a person trained to compete in sports
athletes
utilities
end up living healthy as they go through
alot
Suggestion
a lot
of physical
exercises
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exercise
. Eating habits and physical activities are
also
essential aspects
for
Suggestion
of
to
having a healthy living life. So, is
health
care
facilites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
relavant
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
irrelevant
to current healthy living conditions?
well their
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Well, there
Well their
Well there
well there
are certain sections of people who are against it while few of them feel they both are interlinked to each other.
This
eassy
prepare and issue for public distribution or sale
issue
easy
discussed about how
health
care
facilities are
relavant
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
irrelevant
to healthy living,
in addition
it
also
discussed few other other aspects like
dietery
of or relating to the diet
dietary
and physical exercise
also
play a crucial role in healthy living.
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