Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Television has become a part of every household now because of its easy availability.

Furthermore

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with the inventions of smart tv it has become a necessary item in a house. Some argue that book has been replaced by television to gain

knowledge especially

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knowledge, especially

for the young generation and

this

has reduced their intelligence. I completely agree with

this

notion. Most of the

childrens’

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children’s

children

programme telecasted now promotes too much violence and vulgarity.

For example

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the cartoon Ben 10 is full of fighting scenes using weapons.

Childrens

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Children

are easily provoked by

this

scenes to try it at

home which

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home, which

can be detrimental to their safety.The language used in some of the programmes

are

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is

too informal.

Childrens

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Children

easily catch up the things they see and

listen

perceive (sound) via the auditory sense

hear

.

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listening to

this

vulgarity will definitely influence their speaking.The hypnotic power of

televisyen

broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects

television

tend

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tends

to make children to spend too much time

infront

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in front

of the tv till it makes them lazy and lethargic Reading books

definitely has

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definitely have

more advantages. Reading habit will expand

childrens’

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Childrens’

children

general

knowledge

in many areas. It

also

invokes the

imganitive

(used of persons or artifacts) marked by independence and creativity in thought or action

imaginative

and creative part of

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

.

This

knowledge

is important for children to express themselves and to guide them to make important decisions in life. The

knowledge

gained is crucial for their future when they enter the higher education and for their career. I

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

with the development of technology now

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television is an unnecessary possession.

Instead it

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Instead, it

should be invested

into

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in

books which

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books, which

is paramount for the children’s future and it is definitely a better source of

knowledge

compared to

televisyen

broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects

television

.