In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that
govenments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
should spend
large amount
Suggestion
large amounts
a large amount
of
money
on the construction of high-speed railway lines between cities.
However
, there are some people claim that it would be better to spend
money
on improving existing public
transprot
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
. While I tend to agree more with the
first
notion, I realise that there are other aspects to consider. Both points will be discussed in
this
essay. On the one hand, there are various reasons to explain why it is necessary to spend a lot of
money
on constructing
new railway
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a new railway
. The most important one is the improvement of around
country
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the country
. More facilities
such
as shops will be built around the areas which constructing new rail. Due to new railways, many investors are interested to open the business there.
This
bring
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brings
about an increase in economic growth. Another reason is that it
make
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makes
new choices for people to travel. Commuters,
for instance
, gain an
advatages
giving an advantage
advantageous
advantages
because they can travel to work quickly and easily.
As a result
, some people do not need to rent a house or condo near their offices because they can use hi-speed train. 
On the other hand
, spending
money
on improving current public
transport
also
has benefits to the community. For one thing, people will
recive
get something; come into possession of
receive
recover
a
Suggestion
an
advance system and service. The easiest way for producers to raise the
transport
is 
improve
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improving
the system and service to make people satisfied. One example for
this
is in China, there is a project to transform the service,
costumers
someone who pays for goods or services
customers
are able to enter the train by using face which is
more convenience
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more convenient
than use a member
cards
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card
. Technological innovations is another positive effect. If governments invest
money
on upgrade actual
transport
, it becomes more modern and it sometimes reduces costs and time
.
Accept space
.
For example
, in Italy, the
train able
Capable of being trained or educated
trainable
to run at 180 km/
hr whereas
Accept comma addition
HR, whereas
HR whereas
hour whereas
here whereas
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
use 360 km/
hr
in or at this place; where the speaker or writer is
here
hear
her
in
this
day and age. In conclusion, transportation is the part of people's life.
Therefore
, government and authority should arrange the
money
on both new railroads and current public
transport
effectively to satisfy their needs equally.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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