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People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Give reasons. Some people say public speaking should be taught at school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Speaking in front of an audience is a
skill
 which is not possessed by many. Most of the people find it tough to speak or give a presentation in a public forum.
This
 essay will delve into the reasons behind
such
 difficulties and discuss why
this
skill
 should be taught as a part of
school curriculum
Suggestion
the school curriculum
.
To begin
with, we humans
Suggestion
with humans, we
 are conscious about others’ feelings towards us, and are constantly looking to maintain a healthy relation with everybody. Most of us are
also
 not very confident of our knowledge and wisdom. So, when someone is giving a lecture or a presentation to a house full of audience, in the hope of establishing his positive qualities, he loses his fluency and sometimes ends up providing wrong information. Looking confident on
such
 a platform is another important trait, and in most of the cases it is evident that the speaker lacks
this
 charm. Without the
skill
 to interest the audience, it becomes impossible to continue the session for long. So, to keep the listeners active and focused, public speaking
skill
 is hugely important. Since it is extremely important to develop public speaking skills, teaching them at school is the most effective way. They should be motivated regularly to look beyond their mistakes and concentrate on speaking with fluency and coherence. If they are nurtured daily, they will definitely become
engaging
Suggestion
engaged
 speakers others find easy to converse with.
This
 will
also
 help them land good job opportunities in various sectors. Who knows that some of the students may even become influential social activists like Martin Luther King or Mahatma Gandhi, who can inspire the countrymen to achieve great success
by
Suggestion
with
 their words. To sum up, public speaking should definitely be taught in school and given equal importance like any other subjects.
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