19 .As the world has become technological advance, computer are replacing more and more jobs that maybe lose because of computer. Discuss at lear one problem that may result.

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industrialization, a tremendous amount of occupations

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been replaced by computer-programmed technology.

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has resulted in a

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of outcomes in all socioeconomic sectors around the world. The essay will discuss three of these problems which may

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negative impacts on our societies.

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technological advances because high tech will increase commercial products or  improve non-tangible services.

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will lead to product more profit for them.

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, the rich are becoming richer and the poor poorer. The gap between high-class people and low-class ones

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continually being expanded, especially in developed countries.

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, many auto-motor magnates have made huge profits by using computer -software robot hands to improve their production.

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, many labour workers in their plants have been laid off and suffer from financial difficulties.

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worsening poverty, the development of computer technology

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has triggered

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workforce markets worldwide. Many novel professional occupations have emerged in job markets. For

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, the youth study hard in order to become one of 

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professionals,

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as software

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, IT, computer programmers, and so on. 

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, advanced technological machines will worsen living environments. In factories, they consume a large proportion of electrical energy. In order to meet their demand, more harmful gases will be released into the atmosphere

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generating more electricity.

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leads to more air

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in our living habitat on

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. In conclusion, high-tech industrialization worldwide has created many

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for human beings and societies. These

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include worsening poverty, creating novel professionals, and producing more environmental pollution.

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, all these

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are limited because the general benefits produced by high-tech have improved the quality and quantity of our daily lives. The benefits overweight the

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caused by high-tech.