the pie chart below shows the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.
This
pie chart provides information about the merely
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mere
spendings
in a state between the year 1950 till 2010.
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spending
Overall
, housing accounted the
largest segment of the pie chart in 1950, Change preposition
for the
while
healthcare contributed to be
the least popular. Wrong verb form
being
In contrast
, food contributed to be
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being
the
most popular segment in the year 2010, Remove the redundancy
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while
transportation experienced a lower percentage.
In 1950 housing contributed 72,1% of the total expenditures. On
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In
the
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second
place was the
food, with a percentage of 11,2%. The average Correct article usage
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spendings
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spending
of
education Change preposition
on
was
6,6%. The rest of the categories contributed between 4,4% and 2,4%.
The largest Change the verb form
were
segmen
in 2010 was food with a percentage of 34,0%. Correct your spelling
segment
Futrthermore
,housing showed a number of 22,0%. Other and transportation were relatively the same, with 14,0% and 19,2%. The least spendings were on Correct your spelling
Furthermore
the
healthcare and education, with 4,5% and 6,3%.Correct article usage
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