You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
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citizens are the true power of Suggestion
Healthy
country
.In my point of view Suggestion
a country
the country
atleast
access to basic free Suggestion
at least
heath
care should be a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
priority
of any Suggestion
a priority
the priority
government excuding
few treatments which are new and are of higher cost.
Every Accept comma addition
government, excluding
government excluding
indivial
when paying taxes have right to expect something in return from a human being
individual
govrnment
for the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
examle
better infrastructurean item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
,
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,
good and free medical services etc.Accept space
,
Although
all are very important aspects of any societ but
health comes on top.According to survey 22% of Accept comma addition
society, but
society but
worlds children especially
in Suggestion
the world's children, especially
the world's children especially
world's children especially
asian
countries lost their lives due to no treatment even for the easily curable diseases like a native or inhabitant of Asia
Asian
Malayria
an infective disease caused by sporozoan parasites that are transmitted through the bite of an infected Anopheles mosquito; marked by paroxysms of chills and fever
malaria
,
Flu etc.Those poor parents who Accept space
,
can not
afford two meals in a day how they can pay can not
cannot
doctors fee
.Authorities for Suggestion
a doctors fee
the doctors fee
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areas one out of three patients dies in road living in or characteristic of farming or country life
rural
acciedent
because they cannot get an unfortunate mishap; especially one causing damage or injury
accident
accidents
first
aid on time due to non-payments.
Furthermore
, we have many organisations working together to treat patients suffering from diesess
like an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
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cancer, which
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much, but
disese
are being ignoredan impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
diseases
diocese
,
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,
heart surgeries are Accept space
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impossibe
to make not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
competely
free to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
for
any Suggestion
from
of
governmnet
it the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
wil
be a burden on annual budgetthe capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
,
but they can find a way to solve Accept space
,
this
by working with insurance companies to provide relief to citizens to some extend.
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which costs very less money should Suggestion
a disease
disease
the disease
diseases
definately
be provided free to without question and beyond doubt
definitely
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individual of (used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
nation
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the nation
this
shoud
be their expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
first
right along with food,
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,
cyhes
and shelter.Submitted by pankilasaini on
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