You recently bought something from a TV home shopping channel. The product that was delivered does not have the same specifications / functions as the one advertised on TV. Write a letter to the TV channel. In your letter; Say why and when you bought the item Say what is the difference / what is wrong with it Say what action you would like them to take

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the

food

processor

I bought from your online TV channel on 15th of January 2020. I have watched its advertisement on your shopping channel. Unfortunately, I am dissatisfied with the delivered

food

processor

. The

food

processor

which I ordered is out of order and does not work at all. The multifunctions of

processor

that were advertised, is not working.

Also

, the features which were shown in the advertisement are not available. Another deficiency

which

Correct pronoun usage

that

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I observed

that

Add a missing verb

was that

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the blender jug is

also

crack. There are a lot of tiny cracks on

jug

Add an article

the jug

a jug

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However

rest

Correct article usage

the rest

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of the functions are

also

not functioning. When I tried to blend a mixture, it does not work even once. For these reasons, I would ask you either to refund the purchase price in full or send me a replacement

food

processor

. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Your

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Yours

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Faithfully, Syed Aariz Raza

Wed Feb 05 2020

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

157 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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