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Memorization is information by frequent speaking mainly known As a rote learning it has become important part of education system do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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In
this
 contemporary world
,
Accept space
,
cramming plays an essential role in
education system
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the education system
.
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.
 In my point of view, there are multifarious demerits outshine the merits. To embark with, there are deluge of benefits in favour of my stance. The most
preponderent
having superior power and influence
preponderant
 one is that if pupils do
rote
 grasping so, they can easily achieve higher marks in those subjects which they reckon that are hard to understand.
For example
, in science it is
also
sole way
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the sole way
 to learn math formula extremely easier. That would be very fruitful for students.
Moreover
, in English
,
Accept space
,
Punjabi and Hindi many kinds of idioms and vocabulary are given if people cramming that
kinds
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kind
 of things so that would be always useful for us. On the flip side, there are
plethora
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a plethora
 of
disadvantages
Suggestion
the disadvantages
 of
rote
 learning. While, some people prefer cramming as opposed to understanding something. So, that could have
negative impact
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a negative impact
 on their carrier and excel. Due to
this
, they cannot make
bright future
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a bright future
 because
from
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of
 starting their academics they prefer
rote
 learning rather than understanding the things.
Furthermore
, people can
loss
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
less
 chance to do work or job in any field if they do
rote
 grasping because they
also nothing know
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also know nothing
 about what should they do. That's why, people can face many problems in future.
Hence
, it is apparent why many are against
this
. To conclude,
rote
 learning plays a part and parcel role in
educational department while
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an educational department while
, there are multifarious drawbacks as opposed to benefits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rote learning
  • Cognitive retention
  • Surface learning
  • Critical thinking
  • Problem-based learning
  • Experiential learning
  • Educational pedagogy
  • Cognitive muscles
  • Assimilation of knowledge
  • Skill acquisition
  • Pedagogical approaches
  • Knowledge recall
  • Curriculum design
  • Learning paradigms
  • Synaptic plasticity
  • Educational psychology
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