Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both view and give opinion.

Some people like cold weather,
however
others like high temperature. While some people are of the opinion that cold and calm season is good to survive, I believe that hot and hike season. On the one hand, some people say that a pleasant environment gives a nice feel.
Firstly
, cold
climate
gives
nice feel
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a nice feel
and calm environment.
This
is because the
people
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person's
peoples'
peoples
mind
also
it takes correct decision. Another reason for liking the
climate
is more scenery were open in
this
climate
. Individuals prefer to go to cold places for their vacation, because it gives good experience to see breathtaking views and they can enjoy a lot.
For example
, in 2016, New York Times conducted a study in London among tourist. From that they revealed two-
third
of the visitors prefer cold and calm scenery than other tourist spot.
On the other hand
, I believe that increased temperature is suitable for lifestyle.
In addition
, it gives more energy and power to do our daily works.
Although
human blood pressure is high
on
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for
that season.
Furthermore
, day time is longer and more enough to accomplish the task when
compare
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compared
to other
climate
.
Moreover
,
body
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the body
maintains, metabolism and digestion, in normal functional
level which
Accept comma addition
level, which
helps
to
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with
being in
healthy state
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a healthy state
.
For instance
, in 2015, Cambridge University conducted a study in Paris among college students. In that they found
students activity level
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the students' activity level
students' activity level
student's activity level
increased about 30% in
high degree
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a high degree climate
climate
even though it was normal in cold weather. In conclusion, I believe that
although
high degree is good to survive, there are others like low degree to live.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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