Some people prefer to shop for food in super market other people prefer to their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience .

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shopinng
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
in a big mall or in a small market is
main discussion
Suggestion
a main discussion
the main discussion
between
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among
thier
of them or themselves
their
fans, and in
this
Linking Words
essay I'm going to discuss both sides.
Predominantlly
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Predominantly
, I think, it has no different to shop from
small
Suggestion
smaller
market or the big one if you could find your needs. But the main point
for
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of
distingushing
mark as different
distinguishing
would be considered as various
range
Suggestion
ranges
of goods which are supplied in
market
Suggestion
the market
.
for
Suggestion
For
who has no certain goal to
shoping
make sharp or sharper
sharpen
, provided facilities in big mall will stimulate and persuade people for shopping, as an example,
huge vast
Accept comma addition
huge, vast
huge vats
of
audioable
heard or perceptible by the ear
audible
and visual promotions at malls could reveal
this
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matter which
obviuosly have
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obviously has
obviously have
has obviously had
numerous porportion
Suggestion
a numerous preparation
numerous preparation
numerous population
of investigation. Albeit in terms of customer, what mega malls could offer to their
cleint
a person who seeks the advice of a lawyer
client
is easy access that I believe
,
Accept space
,
this
Linking Words
purpose will persuade
shopper
Suggestion
shoppers
a shopper
to change their direction
solaly
without speed ('slow' is sometimes used informally for 'slowly')
slowly
.
For instance
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.
access
Suggestion
Access
to
nurishments
a source of materials to nourish the body
nourishment
is same as
purshing
the act of applying force in order to move something away
pushing
Pershing
pursuing
cars or
such
Linking Words
those
thing
Suggestion
things
. The other pin
piont but
Accept comma addition
point, but
point but
paint but
pint but
not main is
discounts
Suggestion
discounted
discounting
at big

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inspect produce
  • immediate possession
  • social interactions
  • lower overhead costs
  • tactile experience
  • therapeutic
  • bulk purchasing
  • time constraints
  • international products
  • review system
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