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Task 1 I am going to describe the
wave
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machine
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.
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Machine
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The machine
is placed under the water level.
Wave
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machine
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use
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uses
to generate electric energy with the help of
waves
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the waves
. The
machine
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work with the help of
wave
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generated by the water. In the diagram the
machine
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put in the water in the direction of the waves. When the waves hit the open part of the
machine
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its
cerates
make or cause to be or to become
creates
the
air
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pressure. With the help of
air
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flow the turbine
start
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starts
moving. When the turbine start moving the electricity generate by the electric generator. The fans in the middle of the
machine
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helps
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help
take the pressure of the
air
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in and out from the different directions. There
is
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are
two chambers both
side
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sides
of the
machine
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which take the
air
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pressure in the
machine
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.
the
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The
bigger
wave
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machine
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give
Suggestion
gives
more output and the installation cost
also
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high. The small
wave
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machine
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produce
Suggestion
produces
low output
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a low output
and installation cost
also
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low.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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