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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Introduction
In today's era
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,
 fast
food
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 is a favourite item for most of the people in the world. Day by day
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 the variety
in
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of
 the items are preparing. The younger ones as well as older ones
loves
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love
 to eat fast
food
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.
In
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addition people
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addition, people
 are addicted
to eat
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to eating
 those foods which are not much good for their health.
Body · 1
First
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 of all
,
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,
 I would like to introduce some of the fast foods that are very popular now a
days
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day
.
For instance
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 Pizza
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,
 Burger
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 Sandwiches
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 Pasta etc. The taste of that foods
are
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is
 amazing that's why people wants to eat more and more fast
food
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 because of its taste.
Furthermore
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,
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,
 eating these more junk
food
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,
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,
 younger ones along with older ones
are facing
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is facing
 many health issues like
diabities
a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst
diabetes
,
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,
 blood pressure
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 heart attack etc. But
on the other hand
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 People are eating these type of foods for refreshing their mood swings. Because
manier
social deportment
manners
 of the people are
food
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 lover. They can change their mood swings for eating their likely
food
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.
Body · 2
On the other hand
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, Human's health and their lifeline
becomes
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become
 less because of different foods. I would like to give one example. In present scenario
,
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,
 China
,
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,
most populated country
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the most populated country
 is facing one
diease
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
does
dish
that is
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 CORONA. It comes from meat of an animal and that's why people from china are suffering.
Conclusion
To Conclude
,
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,
 It's better to increase the tax on
food
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. So that
People
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Person
 will be more aware about the
food
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 think about the results
for
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of
 junk
food
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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