Violence in society increases when more violence is shown on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is a universally acknowledged fact that due to

modern technological era

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the modern technological era

a modern technological era

, there were lots of inventions which have taken place in the past. Television and Cinema are one of them. Undoubtedly, nowadays young generations are attracted more towards Television and cinema.

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is one of the reasons

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in the increase of

violence

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in society. Some people hold the opinion that, there are definitely negative consequences because of

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. While, to some extent I tend to agree

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their viewpoint. There are multifarious reasons, which I will enunciate below to prove

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fact,

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some solutions to reduce the proliferate ferocity.

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with no

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with, no

doubt the kind of serials which are shown on the Television contains harmful contents and matters which encourages youngsters to commit crimes and

violence

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’s.

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, in India there is a program called Crime

Patrol which

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Patrol, which

talks about the different crimes and how those crimes are committed by criminals. Definitely after watching

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kind of telecast, youngster may become delinquent, feeling that they would

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appear on television if they do something of that sort.

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, there are plenty of

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movies which contain scenes of cruelty and vulgarity. These are shown in cinemas in all the countries

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There can be

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, out of all those movies some movies might be of prominent stars, which youngster copy or consider their idols. Again,

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motivates them to commit

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an offence

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, there are numerous solutions which can be taken to overcome

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cause.

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, regime of each country can come forward and put restrictions on telecast of these kinds of programs or movies which shows

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a great amount

the great amount

of

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.

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, age limit restriction to watch these movies can be increased from current 18 to 21 years.

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, parents should educate their children and explain the consequences of

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fact.

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but not the least, youngster committing crimes should be given a chance to repent

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of declaring them offenders. To sum up, there is no doubt main reason, which lure the young people

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crimes are because of

violence

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shown on the television and cinema.

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, there are certain things that could be done to help lessen society’s

violence

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if those are followed correctly