Ordinary People Try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this. Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people

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Venerable person is copied by lay people either by reading magazines or watching

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. Voluminous reason is behind

this

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psychological effect, but the predominant reasons are content and the content’s player itself. Since 80% story plays are fictitious base, which has nothing to do with reality, that’s why to become a replica of the character and putting drama scenarios in real life seems aberrant.

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, as per famous

physiatrist

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, 80% of patient among the routine visit list are those who are readers of baseless novels or those who are incessant in watching the movies. By discussing their

behavioral

of or relating to behavior

behavioural

issues,

physiatrist

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says,”

such

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people discrete from their original

personality behavior

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personality, behaviour

personality behaviour

, for

society people

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society, people

they become

nuisance but

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a nuisance, but

a nuisance but

still they are considered the part of the society and they must be

cure

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cured

under preventive measures”.

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, imaginary effects can easily be seen among children, which destroys the personality building in them.

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is due to lack of care and communication with their kids. According to Famous

physiatrist

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Cheng

wo of

make barking sounds

woof

China Says” Mothers

to carry

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carry

on their daily

house hold

a social unit living together

household

activities, make the children

to sit

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sit

before television, without interrupting them. Interruption is necessary to keep them

involve

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involved

in daily words”.

So according

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So, according

to Mr.

cheng

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Cheng

Wo, interruption and involving children in normal communication while they are watching

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is the focal point, and plays will distort less than usual

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watching ways. In a Nut Shell, one could believe that putting up baseless scenarios on own personality by

readings

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reading

novels and watching

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considers

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considered

unacceptable in society and

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, not a good idea to act

accordingly

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. The only way to

coup

brick that is laid sideways at the top of a wall

cope

up with the growing phenomena is to involve people in physical activities even it is confined to

brisk walk

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a brisk walk

and it is

only way

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the only way

to keep mental and

behavioral

of or relating to behavior

behavioural

balance.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

301 words

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Ordinary People Try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this. Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people

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