Now many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What are the problems associated with it? What are the solutions to these problems?

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age of globalization, big cities are running the world by moving the financial wheel and being the

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

of scientific researches.

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, many of these cities are expanding their geographic border to keep up with the ever-growing number of people entering these areas.

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menace

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the menace

like harming the environment and loosing cultural

heritage

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sites should be addressed vigorously in order to identify the ways to overcome the threats.

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with, the increase of

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sizes is

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dangerous for the environment. To elaborate, deforestation and air pollution may begin to occur

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the areas that became included under the municipality zone. As the

city

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expands, more construction will take place and the heavy traffic and factories will cause

higher amount

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the higher amount

of carbon emission. To tackle

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issue,

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government

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the government

should be careful and only allow

city

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expansion upon ensuring that no greenery will be affected and only eco-friendly vehicle can be driven on the locality.

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, a recent study from Cambridge University has discovered that

city

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-life is the biggest challenge for environmental issues and these risks can be controlled through enforcing law and regulation against deforestation and carbon footprint.

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, a number of cultural

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sites are coming closer to the

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areas and sometimes these places even fall inside the new map which can destroy the long tradition, cultural value and beauty of these locations and cultural community.

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, chaos of metropolitan and continuous construction to commercialize the area often disturb the ethnic and historical harmony of that location. A way forward could be to introduce

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government policy

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government policies

a government policy

to protect

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heritage site

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heritage sites

the heritage site

a heritage site

from the expansion of

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areas. If national law

discourage

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discourages

commercial and industrial activities

inside

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the community near

local

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the local heritage site

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site,

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zones will be avoided. For

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, Tokyo

is expanding

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has been expanding

has expanded

since

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five years, but their

government

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was always careful to keep their

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sites save and imposed

50%

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a 50 %

higher tax to the west of the

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which demoralized the businesses to go to that side.

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, temples and old town

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that area was able to save the authenticity. To conclude,

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government

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the government

should be conscious about the demerits of

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expansion as environment and cultural

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sites are two most important factors for any country's peace and prosperity.

Thu Feb 06 2020

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Now many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What are the problems associated with it? What are the solutions to these problems?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, While some people think it is bad. discuss both views and state your opinion.

Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

a growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited while other argue humans must employ animals for research and foods. discuss both views

There are more new towns nowadays, it is more important to include public parks and sports for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?