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Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful.

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Sport plays a vital role in our life. It is believed that being successful at any sports you need innate talents while others think that hard
work
 can make you successful. From my point of view working hard helps us to be more successful. On the one hand, some people believe that natural
ability
 is the most important thing which plays
important role
Suggestion
an important role
 in sport. It
may appears
Suggestion
may appear
 that innate talents is handed down. There are many people who are
thought
Suggestion
thinking
 that they have
natural
Suggestion
a natural ability
ability
.
Such
 as: Mongolian national
wrestler
 Dolgorsuren who are notorious in Mongolia. It is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 believed that his natural
ability
 is handed down his boys who are champions of
wrestler including
Accept comma addition
wrestler, including
 Japanese sumo
wrestler
 Dagwadorj and Mongolian national
wrestler
 Sumyadorj. But even they have
natural
Suggestion
a natural ability
ability
, unless they
work
 hard, it won’t
work
.
Moreover
, most people strongly believe that hard
work
 pays off. Even you don’t have natural
ability
, if you
work
 hard, you’ll accomplish your goal. It is believed and said that success contains 1 percent of natural
ability
 and 99 percent of hard
work
. There are still many people who worked hard and achieve their goals.
However
, many people still think that
gene which
Accept comma addition
gene, which
transform
Suggestion
transforms
 data helps people more notorious less effort. People who have natural
ability
 have more chance to achieve their goals without working hard. To conclude, Since sport is
inseparable thing
Suggestion
an inseparable thing
the inseparable thing
 of life. Even many people think that natural
ability
 is the most important thing. I strongly believe that hard
work
 pays off.

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