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some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. discuss both views and give your opinion

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No matter how the environment is both genders still should be provided with equal opportunities.
However
, some certain types of people trust that women are not as strong as men. From my perspective, women need to make their own choices based on their interests.
First
 of all, there is no doubt that females don’t have enough strength required for
such
 a demanding job. It is clearly seen that naturally women are soft hearted, caring and nurturing. When it comes to taking sacrifice in the defence force, they are vulnerable, and
can not
can not
cannot
 stand for it so that the difference in physical strength of both genders is obvious. But, as a human being, everybody is given equal rights.
Moreover
, admittedly gender equality should exist in every
field including
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field, including
 the armed services. If they are willing to enrol in
this
 sector, we have to leave the choice to them because it is not about us to decide on behalf of them. Taking the real examples, there are plenty of women who served
for
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in
 the military
service including
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service, including
 UK, India, USA and so on. The number of them is more likely to increase in the upcoming future too.
However
, women have more responsibility towards their family members when men are busy with their tasks and jobs
at
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in
 the police departments. Since early years women have been known for staying home and taking care of their children while men are more likely to hunt to feed their family. In conclusion,
although
 women should spend more time with their family, and have a natural characteristic of caring and tenderness, I believe that we should promote egalitarianism and respect their rights.
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