Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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are richer than the relatively poorer

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would be salient enough to affect

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’s perception of whether or not they are leading a happy life?

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topic has always been under intensive discussion among researchers from economics and social studies.

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I suppose no one would deny the fact that income

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are inevitable in any

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contribution made by each

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, the

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are

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, from my point of view, should be kept

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a reasonable range or

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it would create a series of social problems, namely a less happy

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absolute value of household

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will directly affect the level of happiness of a family as it determines their disposable amount and

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their living standard.

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, human

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are much more complex than separate individual households. Comparing in between each other is one of the many things that everyone naturally does and may cause emotional consequences if the

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household

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are too big. Take the United States

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, it has long been scolded by economists and social scientists that the US

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are stratified into too many levels in which 80% of the

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is in the hands of only 10% of the entire national population.

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, a lot of the crimes, including kidnap and robbery

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, would take place because of an ill mindset of revenging

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the rich

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especially

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in the communities where larger

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of

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are spotted.

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the abovementioned potential emotional impacts, the unreasonably big gaps of social

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might bring other negative influences, which could be even more profound and detrimental, to the

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. When the majority of the money is in the hands of the top levels of the pyramid in a

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, it would jeopardize the rightfulness of the

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process in the

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in that the policies may favour the rich groups rather than the majority of the

populations

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. Hong Kong is a typical city

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rich and developed in general but suffers from severe inequity

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distributions. In recent years

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, the

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of the

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found the government only made policies that were in favour of the big companies and real-estate industry despite that they might be in conflict with the

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of the majority.

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has led to a less happy

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in Hong Kong, which gave rise to increased protests and even strikes in the affected industries.

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it is unnecessary and unrealistic for

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to eliminate the

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between

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rich

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and poorer ones, it does not mean that we should tolerate these

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to be exaggeratively big as it will bring a series of severe social problems that may lead to an unstable and unhappy

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