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Sport stars are paid too much for what they do . Do you agree or disagree wih this statement.

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Clearly, sport stars take a huge amount of money as a salary for even minor jobs
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though, their earnings are more than others in career and I agree that players are worthy
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I will highlight both their hard working and payment which they are paid.
To begin
 with, they must work hard on
theirselves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
 to achieve popularity and become
sport star
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a sport star
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as
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competing against sportsmen is the most
complexed
complicated in structure; consisting of interconnected parts
complexes
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by contrast
, other jobs.Let us take football stars as an example, they did not get
this
 rewarding stage easily.
Moreover
, competition for leadership is not for any player
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since, thousands of people do it
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so
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their takings makes up
million dollars
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the million dollars
 fairly. On the other side, all players are not paid more
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because, all managers cannot effort to pay
high salary
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high salaries
the high salary
. One more thing
is the
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is, the
 more players work out
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 the higher cash will be. To conclude, sport stars are worthy for take much salary because of difficult background and making more money depends on their ability and training.
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