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in some culture the parents arrange marriage for their children but in others people choose their own marriage partner. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each system?

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It is known that there are two different
marriage
 types over the world either the couple’s parents arrange the
marriage
 for their children or give them all right to choose their own
marriage
 partner. For many people in Arabic
culture
, arrange
marriage
 is way more common.
However
, there are both pros and cons for each way. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of arranging
marriage
, the most positive aspects in an arrange
marriage
 are both of the bride and groom having a similar values and traditional
culture
, that means there are a fewer
culture
 difference and less conflict. On another side, one of the main positives of giving people opportunity to choose their own
marriage
 partner is they can adjust easily because they are will knowing the personality and attitude of each other and they decided to bring in a matrimony come after deep thinking and
also
 the have a specific plan to manage their life in a better way without any interrupts
.
Accept space
.
 Turning to the negatives of each one, in arrange
marriage
 the main advantage that the parents abolish the decision making skill in the most important event in their child’s life. And the other type of
marriage
 is not always suitable with Arab society and
culture
 and most of parents don’t provide any help after
marriage
 if they faced any problems for their children because they think
that is
 their
first
 choice and they are responsible for any result. Eventually, the evaluation of positives and negatives of each type different from
culture
 to
culture
, even from family to another family.
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