The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

In the media, in politics, and in academia, the impact of a massive
rise
in the total global
population
is arguably
one
of the most sensitive and hotly-debated topics among all of the potential threats to humanity that are currently under discussion. The current essay discusses some of the perceived causes of
this
rise
, as well as asks the question of whether in fact an
increase
in the global
population
should be considered a serious problem when compared to other potential threats to our existence. That there is a global
rise
in the general human
population
is no doubt. China now has a
population
of over
one
billion inhabitants despite the best efforts of their government to control
this
rise
through their ‘
one
-child policy’, while India now has a total number of people approaching the billion mark. The
birth
rate in the developing world countries continues to
rise
as families from certain countries lack access to
birth
control for financial, political or religious reasons, while in some
culture having
Accept comma addition
culture, having
a large family offers a degree of security against the impact of disease or accidents that may befall certain members of that family.
However
, when discussing the seriousness of
this
problem compared to other pressing issues,
one
can find that the reported
increase
in
population
is not universal across all societies and cultures.
For example
, it is often reported that in far-Eastern countries
such
as Korea and Japan, the
birth
rate among the indigenous
population
has dropped sharply over the
last
few decades, and
accordingly
, those working in higher education
worry
Suggestion
worries
that as the numbers of potential students look set to drop in the coming years, some institutes may well have to close. Other European countries
such
as the UK or Sweden are seeing a fall in the
birth
rates of the native
population
, while
this
has been balanced by an
increase
in the immigrant
population
.
Thus
, while in some contexts
population
growth may appear unsustainable, in other contexts, governments are actively pushing for their
population
to
increase
. With the above factors in mind, as long as improvements in resource management and food technology are made, it may be possible to support an
increase
in the
population
of those in the developing world. At the same time, if developing nations can begin to reach economic parity with the developed world,
one
might see the
increase
in the global
population
eventually become curtailed.
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