In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life.To what extent do you agree?

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Choosing proper schools for their children is
complicated problem
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a complicated problem
for parents.
Although
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there are two options that single-sex schools and mixed schools, some people believe that
single-gender
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school affects negatively future of students. I partially agree with
this
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statement and think that it has equally benefits and drawbacks. On the one hand, studying at single-sex schools
has
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have
less discipline issues, which allows effective class time. When boys and girls learning together, there are various contradictions which
lead bad
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lead to bad
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
in the classroom among two genders.
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,
single-gender
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schools can avoid
this
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kind of problems and
as a result
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, everyone would completely focus on their lesson.
For example
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, a recent study found that 85%of students who study at single-sex high schools have more ability
of
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to
concentrate than students
of
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in
co-educational high schools.
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,
this
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type of schools does not waste special time and improves attention skills.
On the other hand
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,
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single-gender school
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single - gender schools
a single - gender school
cannot be mirror of genuine society but mixed school can do.
In other words
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, the latter provide opportunities to build skills
such
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as cooperating which they need to have for
successful future
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a successful future
in
real world
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the real world
. If males and females work together, it will give
chance
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a chance
the chance
to learn different perspectives from each other and teamwork which is mainly required ability
by
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of
companies. In fact, the major criteria of Gatsuurt company, one of
the big
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the biggest
organizations in Mongolia, is co-working in order to employ.
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, co-educational schools positively contribute children to become
skillful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
citizen rather than
single-gender
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schools. In conclusion, I agree with single-sex educational institutions have disadvantages.
However
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, it has
also
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advantages for children to study without
disturbs
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disturbing
disturb
and be productive
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • social interaction
  • real-world preparation
  • gender stereotypes
  • academic performance
  • healthy competition
  • personal and professional settings
  • reinforce
  • collaborate
  • representative environment
  • promote gender equality
  • break down stereotypes
  • social pressures
  • academic concentration
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