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with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Due to the fade-away of original books and the increase of e-books, it is thought to be one of a great development of humans,
although
 there are still some of the people who think it
in contrast
. As a global change, it has its specific advantages and disadvantages. As the technology is being developed and expanded, people tend to use everything in the best convenient way.
For example
, students when doing their project, they almost use their computer, smartphones,
etc
 to do the research rather than going to the library, spending hours to find
paper
 books that could help them find the information. The reasons are simple, it is not time consuming and it is free. Why not using e-books when people say they want to save the environment? As a fact that
paper
 books are made from
paper
 and
paper
 is wood. While thousands of
paper
 books are displayed on bookshelves, thousands of
tree
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trees
 are being cut. No more trees, no more oxygen to survive.
That is
 one of the reasons which urges people do
to
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with
 something in order to save our planet, so they created e-books. Only internet needed to use. But
on the other hand
, using e-books unconcern could somehow lead to some bad impact. As
using
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used
 computer too much is very bad for people, especially their eyes and their physical health. Some surgeries were really bad as people had problems with their eyes and spine.
Moreover
, some people believe that
paper
 books have a certain attraction as they can adopt them to decorate their house, their room while ebooks cannot.
in
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In
 conclusion, the world keeps moving and we have to follow it to survive, the invention of ebooks is precious as it helps us in many purposes and its convenient.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Portability
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Environmental conservation
  • Tactile experience
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Digital fatigue
  • Prolonged screen time
  • Technical issues
  • Independent bookstores
  • Piracy issues
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