More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and the others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In these days, the number of wild animals which stand
on
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at
the abyss of elimination continues to increase as well as others are
also
in the red underlined list. As
becoming
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is becoming
has become
will become
a serious issue because of some reasons and there are specific solutions for
this
problem. Like what people all know, wild animals
such
as white sharks, rhinos, koalas, macaw,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
are on the verge
on
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of
extinction and some animals
such
as Sumatran rhinos or Australia's Bramble Cay
melomys
(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units
millions
had already extinct due to human hunting. People keep hunting wild animals in some illegal purposes as business and hobbies. They use parts of their bodies to sell or to decorate by hunting stealthily. More than that, wild animals which are going to extinct is because of the environmental problems like deforestation. When the forest is burning, that means homes of millions of animals are being destroyed. Animals do not have places and food to survive because of forest fires. But in other ways, there are still solutions that people can do to protect those wild animals. Due to the human hunting, governments have to ban those people from hunting wild species as giving some punishments like
death penalty
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the death penalty
.
Moreover
, as
an
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a
part of the world, people should help each other as much as possible in protecting the wild species or planting more and more trees, etc. As a small action could make the world a better place for both
human
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humans
and animals.
Finally
, wild animals are protected under
policies
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the policies
of the governments. Human can
also
improve
this
problem if they want to improve
this
world.
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