Some people believe that universities should only accept students with high marks. Others believe that universities must accept student of all ages regardless their previous grades. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In my point of view, the both views are all correct. I got a good
grade
at
Suggestion
on
in
a practical exam and had a sufficient
hight
the vertical dimension of extension; distance from the base of something to the top
height
high
hit
school
grade
, so I was accepted by my previous university. Other students who started the university with me were same, too. But I believe that universities need to see their real potential than their
grade
on the paper. Good
grade
doesn't mean the student has a talent and a passion
on
Suggestion
for
the study. They
neee
require as useful, just, or proper
need
to see how great the student carries the task. If he or she cannot follow the lecture,
then
they can drop the student later.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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